http://www.thisisthis.org/2006/01/31/rock-the-boat/ Scattered values and the chance of philosophy. May contain funny. Thu, 08 Jan 2009 12:31:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.3 http://www.thisisthis.org/2006/01/31/rock-the-boat/#comment-85174 Thu, 20 Mar 2008 10:40:57 +0000 http://www.thisisthis.org/2006/01/31/rock-the-boat/#comment-85174 I think you put a lot of nice effort into your words...just a suggestion to help you....you should read a book on sestinas...you have a nac for format and are not too far off from almost writing one. It's a poem that consists of 6 6-line stanzas and an envoy. Normally I don't do much but check e-mail with friends but I was redirected to a different site - saw your thoughts and something stood out from your writing ...I don't mean to sound pushy...I just think you have something...so do it...and do it everyday! Just something a few writers told me to do...at least if I had the nerve of calling myself a writer! Good Luck... Jesse I think you put a lot of nice effort into your words…just a suggestion to help you….you should read a book on sestinas…you have a nac for format and are not too far off from almost writing one. It’s a poem that consists of 6 6-line stanzas and an envoy. Normally I don’t do much but check e-mail with friends but I was redirected to a different site - saw your thoughts and something stood out from your writing …I don’t mean to sound pushy…I just think you have something…so do it…and do it everyday! Just something a few writers told me to do…at least if I had the nerve of calling myself a writer!
Good Luck…
Jesse

]]> http://www.thisisthis.org/2006/01/31/rock-the-boat/#comment-473 Fri, 03 Feb 2006 23:05:00 +0000 http://www.thisisthis.org/2006/01/31/rock-the-boat/#comment-473 Yup. Yup.

]]> http://www.thisisthis.org/2006/01/31/rock-the-boat/#comment-472 Fri, 03 Feb 2006 19:58:00 +0000 http://www.thisisthis.org/2006/01/31/rock-the-boat/#comment-472 Thank you Cliff Thank you Cliff

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